Hey Michael, I truly enjoyed watching your elevator pitch and thought your business concept was rather enthralling and has definite potential for success. I loved your passion and energy, and liked the fact that you were dressed quite nicely for your presentation, as well. My one suggestion for you would be to lessen the amount of time needed in order to record your elevator pitch. Your speech lasted roughly two minutes, so I would suggest you aim for no longer than ninety seconds for your second elevator pitch in the near future. Overall, you did a sensational job nonetheless. Solid work!
Hello Michael! I truly enjoyed watching your elevator pitch video! Your pitch showed great interjection and it was fun to listen to. It was very detailed and has very good points. The only thing I would suggest is to shorten your video to no longer than 90 seconds as to your was almost two minutes long. Overall, You did a wonderful job explaining your pitch. Great job!
Hey Michael, I truly enjoyed watching your elevator pitch and thought your business concept was rather enthralling and has definite potential for success. I loved your passion and energy, and liked the fact that you were dressed quite nicely for your presentation, as well. My one suggestion for you would be to lessen the amount of time needed in order to record your elevator pitch. Your speech lasted roughly two minutes, so I would suggest you aim for no longer than ninety seconds for your second elevator pitch in the near future. Overall, you did a sensational job nonetheless. Solid work!
ReplyDeleteHello Michael!
ReplyDeleteI truly enjoyed watching your elevator pitch video! Your pitch showed great interjection and it was fun to listen to. It was very detailed and has very good points. The only thing I would suggest is to shorten your video to no longer than 90 seconds as to your was almost two minutes long. Overall, You did a wonderful job explaining your pitch. Great job!